Shade's UE Application*Denied*

Shade's User Education Application

My Application - Complete
______________________________________

My Paragraph:

My name is Matthew, I am a 12 year's of age and live in the United Kingdom (UK). I have been with Sythe since the near beginning of May, this year. I have recently become a fan of the UE and have currently written 6 guides. I love Skateboarding, hence why I have written most of my current guides on that subject. Though, I can write other thing's which I think people might get a kick out of. I try my hardest with my grammar since I know it's a big plus into getting accepted. I hope I am accept into the UE since I've spent a lot of time writing the guides, normally a couple of hour's on each. Well, that's my paragraph, hope I'm accepted.
______________________________________

Why do you want to Join The User Education Team (UET) ?

Well, I've write most of this in the Paragraph above but I'll sum it up pretty quickly - I love to educate. I know many fascinating fact's which other's will not know and I'd love to share my knowledge with other's. I have only currently written a few guides because like I previously said, Ive only just gotten into the UET. But I can assure you that if I am accepted then I will write many more great guides which other's will hopefully enjoy. I've spent a lot of time writing my guides so I guess if I don't get in I'll be a bit annoyed. But I mean this truthfully, if you let me in your will NOT regret your decision.
______________________________________

My Current Guides

1. Guide To Doing An Ollie On A Skateboard - Skateboarding

2. Learn About The Part's On A Skateboard And First Trick For Beginner's

3. Learn The Basic's of Snooker

4. Basic Guide Understanding Football/Soccer

5. Beginers Guide To Understanding American Football

6. Guide To Being A Good/Better Citizen

7. Safety Guide To Cycling
______________________________________

"I SH4D3S claim the guides I have written to be completely my own work and written by me using my own knowledge and I have not used any resources to create these guides. I accept that if my guides are found to be plagiarized I will be banned from Sythe.org"
______________________________________

Thanks and hope I get accepted. ^_^

SH4D3S.

 

Im pretty sure you need 5 guides to get accepted. Not wishing you luck though.

 

wow your 12 you seemed muh older good luck when your outher guides are completed!

 

Good luck, SH4D3S. & yea, I'm pretty sure you do need 5.

 

good luck mate, and i think he knows he needs 5, as his app. says its PENDING, which means hes still creating it/its still being looked at.

 

I know you need five. And thank's for the support.

I've put "Pending" on so i'll pm of off the HUE when i've done.

Edit: Uk Hybrid just explained it all really. And thank's, mate. Posted at the same time.

 

ironically he spells "grammar" wrong after he says it is a "big plus" to be accepted......

 

Also you need to add the oath.

 

Before I add it can I ask a quick question:

If I find a website which has all the picture's I need, can I save all the picture's and use them in my thread? Without copying any info from the site.

 

I also suggest you watch your use of apostrophes.

You're using them to make plurals, when in reality you shouldn't be using them for that.

Correct: Pictures

Incorrect: Picture's

An apostrophe is used to show ownership, or put two words together (like don't - do not).

Best of luck, Shades!

 

Add an oath and some guides. But your skateboard guides, are something.

Best of luck,
Merchant.

 

WTF? You're twelve? Oh well, best of luck to you.

 

Good luck!

 

Thank's everyone! Yes, i'm twelve, lol.

I'll add the oath and i've check it and hope i've corrected my porbelms with apostrophes.

 

Spelling errors in red.

You need 5 guides in order to be accepted into the UE, and they can't be basic, and they WON'T be accept if they're inapropriate, or copied.

Your guides are ok, but don't let your ego get into your work, otherwise there's always an chance you won't be accepted. >_<

Goodluck though.

 

Corrected, thanks anyway. >_<

 

Don't try and be a smart ass by correcting his spelling and then making mistakes. Mistakes in red ect.

 

yes I noticed that :laugh:
Anyway good luck Sh4d3S

 

Haha. Thank's for that. Made my day. :laugh:

And thank's Cython and everyone else who's given support.

 

lol love vengence shades you on msn?