Newest Good CnC needed

Alright tell me what you think Id like good intelligent responses

 

The focal point needs work, also im not too keen on the text. it seems very out of place.

 

I really am not trying for a single focul point this time I figured I try somethign new and people to get the concept as a whole and not just oh there is a guy in the middle.

 

Blend the render in more, it doesn't blend with the background.
The font and the line underneath it don't work out to well, and the background isn't catchy enough for me.

Just some CnC that might help you.

 

Thanks even though Im pretty good at making sigs I can only make stuff when I have inspiration lol so sometimes they dont always turn out awesome

 

Quite good. i like how you use your text, but this time it might not be in the best position. I like the colour combination of Render and the background

 

The lighting in the left sort of ruins the mood, the rest of it is dark and gloomy and there is just one light spot - out of place. I think you need to lighten the monster or w/e it is to foreground that.

Other then that, looking good.

 

Ill make a redo of the lighting effects I tried the first time and the render stuck out too much so ill give it another go and see how it works.

 

Although this is a decent signature, I would suggest animation for this type that you have made. If you put animation in, then it would be a 9/10 on exception of the text Good Job on this.

 

That looks awesome. It gives the blood effect making it hardcore.

 

It looks good but the Light effect in the top left corner looks too.... fake Maybe blush it in a little bit or just dont even put it there..

 

Well, as many others have pointed out, the text doesn't seem to fit the overall mood of the signature. Tone it down a little bit, make it a tad darker? Also, the font and placement don't seem to go well with the render. Possibly make it a little more jagged, and make it a little smaller. Blend it in with the render a little bit, and maybe put it in a corner? All just thoughts, other than that, it's immaculate. Great job! 9/10.

 

I would love to see the .psd when your done *begs*

 

Lacks effects, bores me, and the text doesn't match.