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  1. Jason_x

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    Ok this is my newest sig Id appreciate good honest opinions and long worthy C&C not a It looks cool.
     
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    i dont really know much about sigs and photoshop but i say it looks pretty good...
     
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    You use your text very well, and the colour scheme matches the render well. I would say you should add a light source to give the sig depth. 8/10.
     
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    The text, itself, is good. But I think it sticks out to much. The lighting is also very weak and could use some work.
     
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    I cannot differentiate where the render comes out of the background. With the red-on-red layout you've given, he just blends in, and you can't really tell what his intent or emotion is.
     
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    Thanks ex I really didnt plan on him being so well blended into the background but because of the last opinions I got said that my render wasnt blended well enough.
    What do you think I could add to show his intent is too attack?
     
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    The only way to tell that it is looking to be aggressive would be to blur the background around the head (behind the tip, not the whole thing) and then add a bit of light in that background, with a climactic surge of that light nearest the tip.
     
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    Better then anything I can do if that helps...:p
     
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    i agree with vision. it does seem like the character blends to the background. but i do really like it
     
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    To me it looks like he's falling, when he should be jumping out.
     
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    I realize that I blended this too much which I really didnt intend to do but I wanted it to look like he was attacking upward and I thinking if you look at it, it appears like that but I guess I should really define my render more.
     
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    The text is nicely put and the picture is pretty good, thats Gunz correct? I think overall it looks pretty nice, maybe have the text a tad bigger and maybe some lighting effects could make it even better?
     
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    Hmm you came close which makes me really wish I had made my render more distinct seeing is how thats gambit from x men.
     
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    nice sig
     
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    now that i look at it from a different perspective, ya i can see him attacking upwards. so it would be a bird's eye view. thats really the first sig that ive seen from that angle which is why i didnt see it at first. and to the guy above me.. he said not to post something like that. do u read?
     
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    Yay ^ ^ hoping someone else could see it if I said somethign and alot of times no one reads he probably just wanted to raise his post count.
     
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    umm it really does blend in alot, though overall, I like it, i like how you use your text in your pieces, could you please post the original render so we can see how much you had to blend it in.
     
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    sure I dont mind just let me find it.

    http://planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-13658
     
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