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  1. Bbri06

    Bbri06 Apprentice

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    Made it from scratch. CnC please

    I realize the eyebrow is fail. Have to try harder on that next time -.-

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    Oh, thats awesome! 10/10
     
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    Constructive criticism please. Thanks, though.
     
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    Oh, right... The right side of the eye seems a little too shaded.
     
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    Wow that looks awsome, only the i could say is to blurr the eyebrowes, just a little so you can take away the choppiness
     
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    Ah, ok thanks. Nice to see you're back, I haven't been on Sythe forever :p.
     
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    Nice, could be a little wider though.
     
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    It looks a little edgey/choppy, try smoothing it out. Also, the eyelashes looks a little off. Cant quite put my finger on it, but something strange.

    Other than it's gorgeous. 10/10.
     
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    About the eyelashes, the problem with them is that the bottom ones are much longer than the top :p . Also the bottom ones are very sharp.
     
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    Thats amazing... the only thing wrong is the eyebrow. Im sorry if you want criticism but I cant find anything else wrong with it. 9.5/10
     
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