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  1. Unread #1 - Jul 2, 2008 at 10:20 PM
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    ;) my latest work, tried to take some comments into consideration, the ironman 1 is my latest, and my favourite, for that i tried to be me colourful as i normally prefer the darkish colours,no im not emo, well please comment

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  3. Unread #2 - Jul 2, 2008 at 11:20 PM
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    On 1 and 3, the renders seem to be in a strange shape(iron man appears fat, and the ff7 one looks cropped to hard) Stay away from text like that also.
     
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    Ok , i will take that into consideration, what sort of text would you suggest, could you maybe give me some comments on the ironman one as i would like to here about that since it is my best peice imo, Thank you
     
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    You didn't pixel them down to a ratio, so some look demented. No flow/background. Bad text choice, no effects. To me all it looks like is a render (badly) cropped down and slapped on a background you liked (doesn't go with the actual render) and put a font you liked. =/
     
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    Embossed text and outer glow = a big nono.
    Try to add my focus, maybe a light source.
     
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