My First Ever Sig On PhotoShop- Rate And Debate

Not My best of Course-
This is My First Attempt At Photoshop.

Well My Avatar Was My First, But This is my First at Sigs.
Please Rate It.
Tell me Why It isn't Good And Why it is.

Please Don't Give me a Half Ass Comment.
Your Comments Help to Make me a Better Artist.

Signature:
1st Try:



Played Around With it:




Click the Picture To See a Bigger Picture of It.
Render:
http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?autocom=gallery&req=si&img=461

 

Don't take any offense to this, (I know it's your first) but it is terrible.. You have brushes (possibly a C4D covered up) and a render which you blurred, used a font that doesn't go with it, and made it random. The colors in the render do not go with the background, and are not contained in the background, thus ruining it.

You need to follow some tutorials before you can go ahead and make it by yourself, in my opinion, you need a lot of practice. Use a text that can actually fit in with it, and when using a movie render, if you cannot come up with a text, use one on the cover of the movie. Use colors, effects, not something that takes 3 minutes. Don't be a brush whore, take your time. My 1st REAL ps work took me around 5 hours, because I had so much to learn, and wanted to include everything.

Here is just the top links in google, but are useful:
http://www.photoshopstar.com/
http://www.good-tutorials.com/

Sorry if I was a bit harsh, but the best way (told to me by one of the best) is to criticize someone until they get great.

 

I Don't take offense to Anything you Said.
I Understand where Your coming from.

OBviously not the best i can do but The first time i Ever Used Photoshop.
I Didn't Look At Any Tutorials And Maybe i Should lol.

I'm taking you Advice And going to Read up on some tutorials.

-If Anyone HAs anything to say please post because your criticism is what helps me grow.

 

OK here are my $.02

First, your background doesn't really add depth to the render like it should. I find tweaking the layer styles sometimes helps. Also if you add a dark grey layer and paint around the render with a lighter grey and set that under your background, with the right layer styles it can looks pretty cool.

Second, try not to blur your render unless the sig calls for it. Example, it appears to be in motion

Third, try to blend the render by smudging some or using brushes.

 

1- the tag appears to be flat
2- there is no lighting source
3- the colors don't match the render(try using the color picker)

 

as you said first try and clean up the text and the render and wala

 

Overrated render, text sucks and you didn't attempt to blend it into the background.

 

ahh its a pic of spiderman , i just realized that after looking at it for a while, i belive its quite good for first, but then again i only just complet my first one a day or 2 ago.

 

I like it for your first try! I mean it could use A LOT of work but none of that you should be able to do right now. The only thing I suggest you do to it is get rid of the blur on the render. It hurts the eyes, you know;]

Very nice first try!

 

font suck