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  1. Jesse

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    I like mine xD
     
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    two words: gloss whore

    First: I really think you need some more fonts, if you hit me up on msn i'll give you some... just don't tell Adobe *wink wink* and it's all really basic, there's nothing tying the left to the right either.

    Second: did you only spend 2 minutes on this? It's so empty and boring, you're not doing anything new, just sticking to your old techniques... try something new dammit!

    Third: You didn't make the footprints realistic, they look like shit... it's so obvious they're fake, the same can be said for the ball, it has no shadowing and highlighting, it's just flat... with a stroke around the bottom! what the hell man!?


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    i like em, but i think the text is to bright ;/ i have to sqeeze my eyes together to see what it says :/
    else, its kinda, summertime'ish ;)

    i kinda like number 2 acctually, well balanced, and i like the font ;o
     
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    They look decent, but one flaw. THE GLOSS. Take the gloss out, it would look much better without gloss. Fonts are easy to get just look them up.
     
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    i dont like the choice of font colour.. i cant really see what it says..
     
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    I like the first one the best... not a fan of the last one though...
    A suggestion for the first is make the boarder of the gloss more of a wave then a downward bend if you get what I mean...
     
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    Can I see your stocks? Looks like you just like adding gloss, kind of like an orb.
     
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