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  1. Sundialing

    Sundialing Make your life a masterpiece. Live what you dream.

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  2. Sundialing

    Sundialing Make your life a masterpiece. Live what you dream.

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    Any feedback appreciated.
     
  3. Sundialing

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  4. norfwest

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    Original Song: Feedback Appreciated.

    Wonderful song, Sundialing. Interesting instruments - they complement the lyrics well, although I wish there was more instrumental development as the song progressed. They sound really good. Your flow is great. It's fluent and rhythmic. Emotion comes through your voice and lyrics. The lyrics are honest and paint a realistic, thought-provoking piece.

    I'll be playing it :)

    Thanks
     
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  5. Sundialing

    Sundialing Make your life a masterpiece. Live what you dream.

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    I appreciate the feedback, bro!

    If you have anything you would like me to critique for yourself then just let me know thank-you!
     
  6. Sundialing

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    Anymore feedback is appreciated, thankyou.
     
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    Original Song: Feedback Appreciated.

    Feel it lad, strong lyrics and a pretty naughty beat. Also had a stalk through your other freestyles/covers/tunes, got some talent sir.

    Question: The beat/samples, is it an existing track you rapped over or?
     
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  8. Sundialing

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    Thanks man, it's always heavily appreciated.

    Some I have produced and others not so much. However, I always change slight little things when it comes to beats.
    Most have been sampled & some I have just found for free to use.
     
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  9. Sundialing

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    Looking for anymore feedback before I upload a new one.

    Thanks!
     
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    Sounds fine, maybe make it a bit faster.
     
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    Original Song: Feedback Appreciated.

    I feel the woman in the background is a tad too loud compared to your lyrics, otherwise pretty nice
     
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    Great lyrics, flow and instrumental! Sick song
     
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    Good lyrics bud
     
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    man this is fire keep chasing your dreams
     
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