Preview/Not a preview - Zypur's next signature.

Zy was showing me his next work as a signature, I was giving him tips, then I went on a hayday with what he gave me. Here's what I've done with it, and hopefully, by example, he can come up with something similar, because it's what he's looking to make.



After noticing that the border blended too much on this dark background, I noted that it would be hard to see the words that are in the border, so I gave it a tweak. I think it fit well, but is a bit sharp on the 'R'. I doubt that Zypur would take the time to make this type of change but, if he's willing, I'll explain it to him.

 

lots of contrast, maybe too much, but it looks sweet

 

you'd be surprised as to how much of this I did not do.

 

Yer might be little to much contrast.
Also the thing to the left seems a little random.

 

If you look closely, that's his hand, and more specifically, the ring. I added to it by putting a piece of the wall under it to continue the contrasted feeling.

 

Yer i know its his hand and ring i did look lol, but it just seems random...

 

looks pretty good. I like the 2nd one more. as addind the text in same line as the boarder/frame, it's wise to do exactly as you did to make it more clear. and you did that well