Hand Built By Robot's.

Quick banner for my Gfx Team.

Name is the title of this thread and thats what the text says, CnC as normal please.

 

I cant see the text, only built. Try and tidy it up a bit and it can look great.

 

Pretty horrible. Too chaotic and random, no sense of design at all.

 

I agree with the above ^ and ^^ lol.

 

Ok, Thanks for the CnC.

 

well like pees have said, covering the text made has no point. the messy bg is kinda stupid too. and it's kinda simple

 

i think i see a retarded c4d set on lighten...take it off.
make the text at least visible

 

lmao agreed i cant see crap in the text

 

Hwat are we supposed to see? I am so confused.. the whole thing is confusing :S

 

Not meant to be anything Lmfao...

 

There is no composition, nor consistency. This banner is nothing but text behind a C4D layer. No skills were required to create the banner, only about 5 minutes. In the future, use substance, take time, make sure you are making art, not just a quick banner.

 

Agreed, all I see is a C4D (No offense, but a bad one) And some text, which is just a layer, not even special text, get layers in proper order, use better text, add some effects.

 

Atleast add some transparancy on the image itself so that you can see some of the text. It would make a decent header image logo type thing for a website if you can work in the rest of the c4d that goes off the screen.

 

I R like your avatar, and no don't add transparency to the C4D.. That will ruin the image, bring the Text Layer forward and add like 50% Transparency, but add a glow, or something, otherwise it wouldn't be bad. Also I would recommend a border of some sort, maybe not. But the C4D selection isn't good

 

Hmm can't really see the text though.

 

I ment make it so you can see the text through the C4D.

 

I thought there was as the top right loaded, then i noticed it was one big c4d

 

It really is good, I like all the twists and turns of it