Design i've been working on, thoughts? (Updating as i make more)

Thanks for the feedback, been putting alot of work into my instagram so if u are interested follow me @mmmbrand will stop updating this thread now


New Stuff:
(the brand is called MMMichaelapparel if that was confusing but i change names and logos every week so idk; next drops on insta 09.02 & 16.02)

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Thanks for the feedback so far im reading all of it

Will update this thread as i release new stuff will be nice to see the progression
for more pics: @mmmichaelapparel

Logo:

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Black Graphic t-shirt:

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Unisex hoodie (different colors):

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T-shirt Men:

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Iphone case:

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Btw its available already so if u really like it ill send u the shop link

 

I think the logo on the women’s t shirt could use better placement but other than that I’d definitely wear the hoodie and even the men’s shirt.

 

Looks good man.
It’s something I would wear

 

Looks good. I'd wear the white hoodie and the shirt but I think it would be nicer if the logo was white on the black clothes. Other than that I love the simplicity.

 

Im not trying to shit post, just gonna give you my honest interpretation: I saw a dick immediately when i saw the logo.

However, I like the choice of sweaters - the colors and the sweater design itself. Hard to sell the t shirt because I cant tell what the fit is like, so its essentially a vague, black shirt.

 

The M's remind me of the McDonald's logo. Sorry fella.

The wallet looks alright though. Logo's have got to be punchy and memorable. It comes across as a bit of a vaginal-based alien lifeform silhouette.

EDIT: Plus chiller is a very recognisable font. I'd go for something a bit less common.

 

I like the style, I'd wear all of it.

 

Pretty sweet you're designing your own stuff man!

Honestly I don't think I'd use any of that staff, if I'm going simple I don't like logos at all and if I'm going for a brand look I like it to have a striking appearance that catches your eye.

But I'm not a designer and don't have an eye for it so I don't know anything.

 

That black T-shirt with "mmm" is looking really dope, other one has this really weird glow in it.

 

I really like the T-shirts but you can barely see the logo on the black merch. All in all, I would wear.