Real CnC

ok newest

 

good idea bad execution
it's really plain
the cartoon doesnt convey the seriousness.
The pink is very random and should be blood red.
It's flat.
And the innerglow looking border is fail.

 

Ok thanks for the info ^ ^ lets me know where exaclty i need to improve. I know the cartoon really doesnt help describe the seriousness of the issue but I couldnt find any pictures with children fighting a war. Maybe a stock photo.

 

Well if you really wanted you could manipulate a picture of a child and make it seem like a child soldier.

 

^ ^ Gay


^ ^ Meh.


^ ^ Mmm..​

 

First one. The colors are vibrant but meh.
Good effects bad usage.
No flow.
Lacks proper composition and tis very random


secondone. Small, too much going on, and chaotic.


I like the third, except for the anime cut out. It doesnt fit well, it's too low quality. I really like the florals on the left.

 

you're good at this durial

you say a lot of the stuff I would like to say but can't be bothered and I am also too timid to say "shit sucks" often, which is weird, because I tend to be rude and annoying as often as possible in other situations.

 

<3 Jansen
xD

Figured I should do this since no one else was really giving PROPER CnC.



P.S. FUCK AP ENGLISH 3 HOMEWORK! @#$%^&*( FUCK.

 

help.

 

no good.
monochromatic. stay away from it
horrible text.
pixel stretch is too obvious and they shouldn't be used for backgrounds.
the render does not blend.
the render takes up around 80% of the sig. meaning only 20% of it is background you did.
no flow.
no effects
lacks composition.
very bleh
seems like a 1 minute sig.

PixelStretch+Brush+Brush+slap render+flatten image+desaturate+colorbalance+text=no bueno.

 

Rae mine... Its rather alright And i didnt make it.

 

I'm rating signatures not pixel art or text.

 

bump
bring up my post.

 

Help? paid $40 for this.

TDD's Comment: " This doesn't worth $40 get at least a $35 refund"

 

yea you got ripped on 40$.

The anime render is super slapped on.
The colors are good but they arn't placed well.
lighting is comming out of every corner.
the background is the flux.
and its very flat.
seems slapped onish.

seeing this one after the other one the only positive parts are the downloaded shapes.

 

This is my first REAL sig, I guess. I know, no effects, no depth, whatever.. etc.

;[

/expects hardcore criticism

 

Ok thanks for the comments, Durial.

Its not actually downloaded its from skade that one u see before.

Can u tell me how to make it better? Because Skade might edit it .
(paid him $40)

 

well first of all add some effects to it and that floral pattern seems like a download because it's in his other sig, make the render match the sig. like nothing fits together it's like using 3 pieces from different puzzles and mixing em together atm.

ill cnc yours 2morrow bomb im sore as a mofucka right now and tired from this party.

 

It's my very first sig, so I'm expecting lots of criticism.


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Mr. Goosey deserves a refund.