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  1. Skrit

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    Hello there, sythe.org.
    I have recently been... creating things in photoshop.
    I dont believe these things to be very... good, but unfortuntely I have alot of people telling me to... show off what ive done.
    So, I come to you, with reluctance, to show you all a few of the... images I have made.
    You can rate them if you wish.
    But even if you do not rate them, please, tell me your thoughts on them. I would like to see the areas in which I should... improve.
    Here they are:
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    Thank you for your time!
     
  2. fir3 skillz

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    I assume this aint your first time? Btw, if i had to rate- 7/10.
    Pros- unuiqe
    Cons- ugh, to bright...need curtains?
     
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    Pros- very elegant

    Cons- Add A Picture to backround?
     
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    Lol fire skiller..ur critizing him? look at ur orb..the back ground is white..
     
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    Pros - Different (In a good way)

    Cons - Text is terrible :[
     
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    Pros: Colouring and very unique.

    Cons: Horrible text placement and coloring, Colouring very bright :p
     
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    You should get text that matches. And pretty nice for first time.;)
     
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    really good....clearly you have done this before lol
     
  9. Skrit

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    Thank you for all of your advice. After reading your opinions I found that almost everyone (if not everyone) thinks the text should be changed, and it should be a little less bright. I am currently looking for some new texts, and ways to make it a little less bright, so as soon as I get things reorganized I shall post some new work on here.
     
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    Amazing, I see you like the Water like texture and look of the Back Image, Its very nice.

    I dont know much about graphics, But thats some outstanding Pics right there.
    Can you please make a tutorial on how to make some of them?
     
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    There alright, obviously i've seen better.

    But it is as you say your first time.
     
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    Then you should try using more appealing color for your backgrounds.
     
  13. Zima

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    First: Looks like a cumstain.
    Second: The text is horrible; remove it completely, and there's not flow. Trash it and try again.
    Third: Too much brush work. Badly placed+off-color text. Remove entirely.
    Fourth: Makes me feel like I'm high. More like this.
    Fifth: GET RID OF THE FRIGGIN' TEXT.
    Sixth: Reminds me of the first one. But less like a cumstain, more of a bloodstain. The text is kinda nice in this one. Keep it.
    Seventh: THE FUCK WERE YOU ON WITH THAT TEXT. It's perfectly symmetrical, and then the text just goes and blows that.

    Over all, your skill level, judging by these, 6/10. I see alot of potential in you. You understand colors, and flow. Keep up with what you're doing, read some guides, and experiment. You'll go far.
     
  14. sharp-knife

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    i liked the 4 one i guess???? but the text was terible
     
  15. yhsa2nd

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    nice job! i rate 6/10
     
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