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Well i came back to sythe to idk do GFX for GP nd then sell it....etc...but anyways lets see what you think.

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(Logo i made for a website in a contest)





Thanks for lookin hope your eyes are still not in shock

 

New Brachet I made for my new tournament website im making

 

Nice job. The first one is your best use of lighting IMO.

 

olol Jokerman font
I havn't seen that in a while.

Your second is the best in my opinion, dispite it being cut off and the background being plain.

 

alll look pretty cool

 

thanks so far guys

 

2nd one ownz man! keep it up

 

broo! there the best ive seen yet.

10/10 ill be in contact with you

 

I like it, keep it up

 

nice one first ones best

 

First work - You still need considerable work on your realism in lighting. You did fairly on the diamond earing, but you should have made it slightly less bright. Your bracelet is nicely done. His teeth, however, not only are too bright with the overglow, but they are not uniform. You've got a bright gradient that only comes from one point, instead of all across as it should be. The gradient of light that you placed in the back, behind him, not only does it not fall behind him as it should, but it's not even supposed to be there, considering how the light falls on his forehead, showing that he should have the light coming from in front of him, rather than from his back right.

Second work - This is a good use of color, and fair choice of color, however, your randomness has no conformity - no general flow to it, which makes it unfocused, and there are no 'leading lines' that take your attention to the subject, we only know that he is the subject because he is the only non-abstract object in the signature.

Third work - Though you might already know your text needs work, this shows good flow and transition, and I find this to be your best work. Your text, however, is too complicated, and takes away from the idea of looking into the subject matter more deeply, as it should have been - seeing as this is an abstract.

The rest - These feel as though they were all made before the works I've already critiqued, and are far more amateur. You are making progress, but stick to a focus and flow in the future, and try to keep your subject matter off of the center of your images. This is always more appealing to the eye.

 

All look good, but the Disaster one, the bottom border doesn;t go all the way to the left side lol, its about 1px off.

 

weeezzzzyy F baby! thats the shizz