Check Out My Rap!!! BIG TUNE! 1 VERSE of LYRICS POSTED - - tune coming soon

hi guys, here are the lyrics to the 1st verse of my tune.

my tune will be posted soon when its edited...

hope you like.

Ok listen up.
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Whatsup britain im temper, they call me that cuz i lost it ten years back this december, and i never ever found it again, i must of dropped it down the carsie when i pulled the chain or soming. Anyways since i aint gettin it back I decided id get into rap...when WHSMITH picked up the pies i went through em like a drug addict went through ice. When that very firt time i just couldnt do it, i remember i said id go through it, like fuck i produce this, im so roofless who the fuck are you did you produce this?!?! truth is i was just being so toothless, when tyson smacked me and i was not through with this!


CHORUS
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From the begining ive been givin it all, Ive been givin it all that i got! GOT!

tryna make a living from this break up...this breeeeaakkkk up!!!

 

I swear ive heard this tune before, maybe its just the chorus

 

You repeated the same line twice...Well not the whole line but...You know what I'm talking about.

 

I like it so far. I can't wait to hear the finished version

 

nice it will be cool