im a noob =/

well this is my 3rd sig and yea it stinks... =\

im trying to follow some tuts though so yeah..

 

looks like you cut off a part of his head poor guy.
Well its not that bad. Your just starting so don't beat yourself up.

 

Lighting sucks, render sucks, text looks OK in that lighted spot, too big (You don't have enough content to cover that area).

 

i also think its too wide.
and i didnt do any effects like lighting,smudging etc.

 

Why the fuck not?

 

cause im a complete noob when it comes to doing these things im still trying out all this new stuff like smudging and using c4ds etc.

 

its soo plain

 

Really plain, no decent filter use. But the lighting is sort of OK.
2/10

 

Don't use C4Ds, it'll take you bloody ages to unlearn them.