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  2. WoW Blows is gay

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  3. Shredderbeam is awesome

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  1. joewnn

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    INTRODUCTION
    Not just any ordinary man. But the man of Jefferson Analspring himself. He was a fine young lad, nicely prepped anus I must add. I, living on a cotton plantation, and him, being a black cotton picker, our love had to be secret. I liked the thought of forbidden love. Before I had even met my Jeffy-kins, I had dreamed of catching a glimpse of a black man's anus. Often I read stories of black men who hid diamonds in their enlarged rectums. Late into the night I would read these stories, often dozing off into a dream in which those diamonds were replaced with my penis. That tight black anus surrounding my genitals. Then I would usually wake up in a cold sweat and a very wet jockstrap.

    CHAPTER 1 - The Pain of Love (short)

    "GET TO WORK YOU FUCKING SLACKOFFS..." I heard one morning as I was just arising from bed. "JEFFERSON GET YOUR FAT ASS OVER HERE," I heard an overseer say, followed by the crack of a whip. Then followed a scream, which I instantly recognized as Jefferson's. The scream of my lover. I bolted to the door, trying to remain calm. No one had the right to lay a finger on my lover.

    CHAPTER 2 - Forbidden

    COMING SOON
     
    joewnn, Dec 27, 2007
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    Thats nice.

    If you wrote this, its ok.. but try to take out some of the things that explain dialog like "he said" or "so and so said"
     
    shakaka, Dec 27, 2007
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  3. joewnn

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    hahahahahahahahahahaha

    I'm going to continue this just for you
     
    joewnn, Dec 27, 2007
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    weird lol
     
    pink pak, Dec 27, 2007
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    Continue! That gave me an orgasm
     
    Ermky, Dec 27, 2007
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    do it! lol i thought you were serious and was being nice but now that i know your not its really fucking gay. Not very poorly written, though.
     
    shakaka, Dec 27, 2007
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  7. joewnn

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    Really? That was just freewriting, or whatever you'd call writing a homosexual erotic story off the top of my head..
     
    joewnn, Dec 27, 2007
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  8. joewnn

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    mmm the thought of giving you an orgasm through my stories gives me intense pleasures.
     
    joewnn, Dec 27, 2007
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    bewbs
     
    shakaka, Dec 27, 2007
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    Blacks... pick cotton...
    I wish.
     
    Cruel__Machine, Dec 27, 2007
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    lmao....
     
    RA1fu, Dec 27, 2007
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    kinda weird, but actually not too bad a story.
     
    The_Ace, Dec 28, 2007
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    Prove it! Trole Tier 1 Prizebox Tortoise Penis Le Monkey UWotM8? Wait, do you not have an Archer rank? Potamus
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    I vote WoW Blows is gay.
     
    Govind, Dec 28, 2007
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    I vote WoW Blows is gay.
     
    Skwaks, Dec 28, 2007
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    Who's gay?

    Oh yeah, WoW Blows.
     
    shakaka, Dec 28, 2007
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    WoW blows me hehe soz
     
    Serial, Dec 28, 2007
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    Joewnn, your gay tendancies are starting to scare me. :eek:
     
    Covey, Dec 28, 2007
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  18. K-3-V-1-N

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    WoW blows is gay.... hmm. I'm sure the comic appeal will run out eventually...

    LIKE 1 FUCKING YEAR AGO!
    SPAMZ1!11!!!1
     
    K-3-V-1-N, Dec 28, 2007
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    Man i wish i were you...
     
    eias, Dec 28, 2007
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    Wow blows is gay.
     
    Mentis, Dec 28, 2007
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