Opinions on a thread template please

Graphic design student practicing some template work, feedback please.

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Nice work man! im assuming you did the illustrations?

The only thing slightly annoying is the laptop screen. It's blurry.

Other than that, i like it

 

Sadly not, illustration is my downfall, mostly Photo manip and UI stuff, just getting back into things.

 

I love the work! It is exactly my favorite type of style.

 

Thanks, planning on doing some other storefront templates soon.

 

I personally like the design, it's simple and minimalist.

I would change how the tablet on the second slide looks though, it has a weird outter stroke on it.

 

Thanks for the feedback, Yeah i see what you mean now.

 

I quite like it who made it?

 

I did

 

looks sick af

 

nice job rod!

 

Really clear and to the point good work