Tech It!

OK I made the original of this for Covey ( if he wishes to use it ) for his spalsh screen for ES, I liked it so I decided to make it into a sig, so here it is!



I didnt think it was bad but eh It could be better?

Rate it Never Hate it, Appreciate it!

 

Erm, bit different than usual.

The lines just above and below the text are to thin and in that case gives them bad detail. The white areas are very plain and does not flow.

It seems if you have squashed it but I see how your idea works, it could be so much better. Text is also nice

7.5/10

 

Yeh I re did it I got it on my other pc I will update it when I get on it.

 

The text of 'press' should not have the filler grid on it. the 'shines' of white that you've got going on are too random, and they need a lesser contrast. Your shines should also have a gradual development in some areas, and a focal shine point.

 

Ya know I woulda never saw that the shine in it didnt match the flow and were to bright *high five SMI* XD

 

huh .. nice .. i like that 8/10