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Please CC

 

1's my favourite, but I like the wireframes in 2.

 

Any other tips for me?

 

Try a smoother text in the first one. One that doesn't lose quality as you decrease the size.

Think you were going for a web effect in the second one?, try making it a little more obvious. I was looking for webs, so i could tell...but

other than that great, sexay

 

Ye, I might edite the first one, because when you look closely, you can see the first black corner isn't set up right

 

the 2nd one is pretty good. hope u win

 

Firstly, Gamer; Shut up and stop forcing your post count up.

Anyway; Definitely change the text on the first one.

And again with the first one, it might look better with more shades of black.

I like the second one, can't really cnc on it.

 

hey what is your problem i just said the 2nd one is good the 1st one has messed up text....

the 2nd one better omg.