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OMG, new yo.
Current.

 

sorry mate, that thar lighting in that stock comes from thar top, yars coms up from thar bottum.

So basically the lighting does not suit the render,
apart from that it is very nice
-You got away with using alot of negative space here.

 

I don't see how my lighting is off, if you look close enough at the top left, you'll see light.

 

Its good, the render is just a little to covered but i hella like it. Could use a border.

sexy >.<

 

The bottom left corner looks way too cluttered.
Also- seems like it needs more contrast.

 

I like the framing, and overall it's very nice. You should consider making her come from the flow, instead of appearing out of it (opacity.) if she was in the image more, than you would find that the background would turn out much better.

 

I like it

 

Kai your ligting is coming from the bottom, just because you soft brushed in some faint light there to remedy it doesn't change that.