Pretty Flowers (new style rate please)

new style i tried.. not much effort but it works.

 

Too much color.
Bad text wich is hard to read.
But looks ok.

 

To bright.
And I can't read the text.

 

I think it's very good, just make the text a bit clearer.

 

3/10

way to bright
work on blending the render just explodes out
text=nahh not at all

good work tho ;]

 

I like it, ignore these newbz.

I think the text needs a bit of work though.

6 / 10 (8 / 10 with text improvement)

 

ok that calls for more constructing criticism!!!

instead of a black border go with a colour thats in ur sig (im sure ur using gimp, and im not sure if u can change border color with gimp...) and that will help alot

also whn tryng to blend in your render, erase/slightly smudge ur render into the background not have the bg affects swarming over the render as u have done here, but thats ok ur gettn there ;]

change that text up some and ull be good too go ;]

 

Looks decent , however the brushing is too obvious and it looks as if you were a raw beginner, render blending was done wrongly as well hence you shouldn't try doing it with erasing only but with hue adjustments aswell.

 

Busy, busy. Try to concentrate the colors around the render, bursting up from the bottom, like a flower shape (or relative.) Move the render from the far right to 1/3 from the right. Make your text simple, not a cursive font.

 

It's to chaotic, you want to ty to make sure it flows and brings focus to the render, also lighting is really important flow tool, try to get your lighting in help the flow not just light the render from a point on the sides.