remove the tech pixel lines. It's okay, needs some gradient maps to spice up the color, maybe also change the text.
0.o That's unique. I like the concept but I think it could of been pulled off better. As suffer said the tech lines need to go. Text doesn't really fit but I suck at text also. The flow goes wandering on the left hand side, nice depth though. Lighting needs a little tweaking as well because it looks slapped on and too harsh....it would look a lot better with like a soft feeling. Not bad for getting back into it. [EDIT] That's an improvement.
