sprite signature

please give some feedback







EDIT: made a couple different variations

 

anyone? i would really appreciate some feedback

 

I like the effects around his feet and lower legs however I think if you cleaned it up a bit it could be very nice. Seems to cluttered to me and a bit whored. It might be kind of cool if you created some negative space but not sure.

 

Holy waytoomuchc4d! It's good, but you need to clean it up heaps, perhaps try some other effects too, try some filters and alternate smudging techniques, right now its just a mess with flow.

 

thanks for the cnc, i was kinda trying to go for the whole c4d look but i guess i overdid it a bit, ill fix it up a bit.

 

way too c4d whored. you should learn some serious smudge techniques, use some filters to acheive good effects, the lighting is alright, not counting the c4ds (they ruin your lighting). The flow, it's there, but you've got it on the wrong angle, it's more of a 45degree angle, rather then your 80 or so degree angle it's going at. I like what you've done with the text, but that circle makes it look a bit too focussed on.

The black and white version makes it look alot better, because alot of the c4ds are taken out, giving better flow and over-all better look.

 

Way too much c4d but the second one from the bottom would be my favourite. Shows more detail on the character

 

thnx on CnC

 

Nice picture, but I think that you should make the words bigger. 7/10.

 

The render is a kick ass render but it is to common, alot of people use that one. I would say the third one is the best. The last one isn't that good because sprites don't really look good in greyscale. The text is really really good, im really loving it. (Please pm me a link to that text.) The position of the text is perfect in the bottom left. On turn off to this sprite sig is that there is tooo much c4d's in it. Alot of people love to use c4d's but it really kills a sig if the person whores it. Try to use less c4d's next time. I'll rate this a 8.5/10. Keep up the good work.

 

thnx for the feedback, font is moderna btw

 

Jeez TDD, nothing impresses you! lol I like it good job... GIVE IT TO ME! lol just kidding

 

I just point out the flaws in things, doesn't mean I can't like it.

 

I was just kidding anyway =P

 

h-wow when did you stop sucking

if you learnt some sumdging you could definetly make this sig look way better, maybe make the lighting more intesnse on the left leg of the sprite