C&C my DBZ Tech sig. [FAIL]

Here's the fruit of my hard, painful labor;

v1


v2 Less c4d whored, but looks pretty empty on the sides..


C&C ONLY NO spam like "5/10" or "nice gj" I DO NOT want rating, I'm after C&C.

We'll anyways, go easy, i know its not very good, not even close to the meaning of good. It's only SOME-WHAT tech related, i couldnt find a good BG so i used a C4D, I feel like poking my eyes out everytime i look at it tbh. Dont mind where it says anti-rip, oh and i need help on the right font.

any advice would be helpful, please and Thank you.

REMEMBER: C&C AND C&C ONLY.

 

I personaly dont like it not that is sucks but its not that great, Great effects could improve on the C4D doesnt really match

 

That made NO sense to me what so ever, please only post if you know what the hell you're talking about.

 

very nice i think the 3 star dragon ball could've been done better like the border of the sig/orb.

p.s. meow

 

There is only a few people on Sythe capable of giving good C&C. Well anyway.

The kinda orb things around the edges are quite easy to do, although they don't look good in such a dull and boring mustard colour IMO.

The center orb is better with the things around the edges, that's a hard skill to do.

The background is bad because you've just put some C4D's and beveled lighting brushes.

In my opinion the center would look good with a coloured picture, slightly tiltied so it actually looks it's part of the orb.

Next time for a tech sig i would suggest you use a semetrical style, such as TDD's first ones.

The banner on the top i don't really like, because it doesn't fit the rest of the sig, and doesn't blend at all.

Overall a good first attempt, just work on those pointers, and if you need anymore help just ask on MSN.

 

There is only a few people on Sythe capable of giving good C&C. Well anyway.

The kinda orb things around the edges are quite easy to do, although they don't look good in such a dull and boring mustard colour IMO.

The center orb is better with the things around the edges, that's a hard skill to do.

The background is bad because you've just put some C4D's and beveled lighting brushes.

In my opinion the center would look good with a coloured picture, slightly tiltied so it actually looks it's part of the orb.

Next time for a tech sig i would suggest you use a semetrical style, such as TDD's first ones.

The banner on the top i don't really like, because it doesn't fit the rest of the sig, and doesn't blend at all.

Overall a good first attempt, just work on those pointers, and if you need anymore help just ask on MSN.

 

I think You should have either found a diff
render or blended it more also
you should have connected the 4 star like the
rest if gohan was pushed down a little on the sig
and connected to the 4 star i think it would look better

 

I think You should have either found a diff
render or blended it more also
you should have connected the 4 star like the
rest if gohan was pushed down a little on the sig
and connected to the 4 star i think it would look better

 

No flow whatsoever, nothing fits together, etc.

definately not a good thign to use in a sig, and it's far too flat.

 

It's horrible, to be honest.

 

/agree'd

 

Lol nice one