Solaris OSRS | RSPS| Trailer | Need YOUR feedback!

Hey guys, this is the first video i've ever edited in sony vegas.. i know there's some mistakes[still learning]. Let me know how I can improve and/or what you liked/disliked about the video..

Make sure to watch in 1080p and leave feedback please thanks!




also what would you guys think of this being the beginning of the next version of trailer?

 

It's okay, but not that amazing, 6/10.. There's a lot of things you're missing. Why the black bg, and white text tho?

 

Thanks for the feedback, sony vegas is definitely a learning curve for me coming from a basic editor like camtasia. I used the white text & background just to highlight some key features/break up the video content. I am currently working on a WAY better intro to start out the video & also will re-do the entire trailer video once more content is added to the server. Next one will be way better.

 

thinking of this for a beginning part of the trailer, then obv the content & more editing would come after..whatcha think?

 

Better than black bg and white text.