Finally made something new.

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Finally made something new.
  1. Unread #1 - Jun 14, 2007 at 5:20 PM
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    Finally made something new.

    Yes I know the text sucks.
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    Now that i look at it the wireframe does not fit in the tiniest bit....
     
  3. Unread #2 - Jun 14, 2007 at 9:16 PM
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    Finally made something new.

    very nice work yea text sucked but overall 8/10
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jun 14, 2007 at 9:22 PM
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    Finally made something new.

    nice one man
     
  7. Unread #4 - Jun 14, 2007 at 9:39 PM
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    look nice i liek it
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jun 14, 2007 at 9:40 PM
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    if you make the text color other than white ill give you a 9/10 :p
     
  11. Unread #6 - Jun 14, 2007 at 9:42 PM
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    Finally made something new.

    Thank you all but I would really appreciate if you gave me some advice instead of just saying you like it (excluding you:latin king).
     
  13. Unread #7 - Jun 15, 2007 at 2:05 AM
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    Finally made something new.

    7/10..the colours could of been abit better
     
  15. Unread #8 - Jun 15, 2007 at 1:48 PM
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    Finally made something new.

    I like it in black&white.
     
  17. Unread #9 - Jun 15, 2007 at 2:00 PM
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    Finally made something new.

    DEPTH! use blur tool m8.
     
  19. Unread #10 - Jun 15, 2007 at 2:42 PM
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    I'm not going to blur any part of it..
     
  21. Unread #11 - Jun 16, 2007 at 7:35 AM
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    7/10 Blame the text :p
     
  23. Unread #12 - Jun 16, 2007 at 9:07 AM
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    the text isnt that bad, it suits the background, but not the render,
    the back ground is pefect for that render-
    render does not need to be blurred because of the metalics on both of the characters, metal+blur=bad


    my advice is to take the rectangular grid in the background and fade it some more
     
  25. Unread #13 - Jun 17, 2007 at 3:48 AM
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    Thats SICKKKK 7.6/10
     
  27. Unread #14 - Jun 17, 2007 at 4:49 AM
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    text sucked yes. looks good but try to use the burn and dodge tool in oyur work mostly at blan and white pieces to create more depth
     
  29. Unread #15 - Jun 17, 2007 at 9:00 AM
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    7/10 ur name ruined it all :D lol
     
  31. Unread #16 - Jun 17, 2007 at 10:45 AM
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    Finally made something new.

    I am not fond of it too much... those random whiteish things, they look weird and they do not fit in really, the BG was chosen wisely tho and fits with the render so that's nice, just add effects that dont look weird but good, we know you can do it bro.
     
  33. Unread #17 - Jun 18, 2007 at 12:27 PM
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    Finally made something new.

    I LOVE the wireframes, but yerr. Text needs brushing up on..
     
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