Feedback on signatures

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Feedback on signatures
  1. Unread #1 - Jul 23, 2015 at 5:00 AM
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    Hey,

    I found these signatures that I have made a few months ago and as someone who is constantly trying to improve on his photoshop skills, I would like some CnC on these pieces of work. Thanks. :)

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  3. Unread #2 - Jul 23, 2015 at 10:39 AM
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    I'd say that they aren't too bad. The centre one looks the best out of them in my opinion. You need to work on the composition of the other two a little more as the renders look a little lost. I would also look up some tutorials on basic smudging to give the renders a little more connection with the background. Also, the colour scheme should be matching a little more fluidly.

    Top: 4/10
    Central: 6/10
    Bottom: 5/10
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jul 23, 2015 at 11:02 AM
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    Nice work but I kinda agree with GodPoker... Maybe a 7/10 for central
     
  7. Unread #4 - Jul 24, 2015 at 11:50 AM
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    When you say that the renders look a little lost, do you mean that its placement in the signature is a little weird?
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jul 24, 2015 at 12:18 PM
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    No, the placement is okay. It's just that it looks like it's been plonked onto the background without any sort of connection to it. Easiest thing is to try a gradient map or to wrap a c4d around the render from the background. ;)
     
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    Will do. Thanks for the advice! :)
     
  13. Unread #7 - Jul 25, 2015 at 4:19 AM
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    Try a cleaner approach. They look sloppy to me.
     
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    What do you mean by a cleaner approach? Do you mean I should clean up the edges of the render more or...?
     
  17. Unread #9 - Jul 25, 2015 at 11:08 AM
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    For the record I don't know what he's referring to.
     
  19. Unread #10 - Jul 27, 2015 at 12:57 PM
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    I like the top one the best but you definitely work on rendering. Not bad at all though :) Keep trying
     
  21. Unread #11 - Jul 27, 2015 at 11:08 PM
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    These a pretty nice. I'm sure over time you will get better. The last one is my personal favorite.
     
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