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Opinions on a signature I did for someone on a RSPS?

v1:



v2:

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Nice work man, looks great!

 

Version 2 definitely looks a lot better/cleaner. I'm not sure about the woman in the signature, however, as there's not really great contrast, it's hard to see, and her belly is showing through the "O" for some reason (thought you might cover it up).

All-in-all you did a pretty good job though imo.

 

v2 looks very nice and remove the girl.

 

There is a line right down the middle of the girl in Version 1, it looks odd.

Version 2 is cleaner, just make the girl cleaner in the sig or remove it, as other have suggested

 

For everyone telling me to remove the girl, it was the staff members request to have the girl in the signature, if it was up to me I would never have put her there. Thanks for the feedback

 

The girl can still be in the sig (of course you have to cater to the customer) but the implementation of her could be a lot better. First a better render of her would be ideal (this one is cut off) plus she's behind the text but then magically her stomach is in front of the text, totally throws things off. I'd have liked to see a better of job of blending the background in with the text too, only having part of it over top of the text and at lower opacity would look better imo. There needs to be a foreground and background and the lines between the two in this are blurred. The last thing is more of a minor pet peeve but you can see minor clipping around the edges of the canvas where it overlaps and you are aware it is a box as opposed to having transparent edges. All in all a nice piece but there's still much that can be worked on man, keep going and definitely post more round here.

 

Thats a really nice job! but like MOD jack mentioned, that girls stomach magically appearing inside the O doesn't really look authentic. I suggest you change the girls color's a bit so that it gets dimmer, make it look more like an ANIME, it would fit better i guess. Also the hats color instead of red, maybe a similar blue would be better.

You are the artist bro I don't share a similar artistic eye, but obviously u wanted feedback and opinions

have a good day.

P.S: Still waiting for my free signature you promised on your first post ! I know it will kick ass!

 

The second one definitely makes sense and looks better than the first one. Also as the person above said the girl doesn't really appear good in the letter "O" - should fix that and leave it transparent behind