New Thread Design i made

Hello, I am new at Sythe, i see that the Graphics Section is pretty active and i like that!

Anyways let's get to the real stuff.



And if the font is too small for you, you'll get a spanking!​

 

I like it but the white makes it quiet plain

 

That's the point

Clean and simple, attracts alot of people.

 

The whitespace isn't necessarily bad. Padding makes it more readable, though perhaps there is too much in this image. The font is way too small. It should really be as big as possible while still looking good. The header is pretty gross too - the image is way too sharp and I'm not so sure about the color.

Good concept! Just needs a little tuning before I'd sell it or anything.

 

Lots of white space which i guess is good since it helps focus on the text.. The text is unnecessarily small though, go ahead and spank me. Id increase it a bit since you still have lots of room.

 

Plain, simple, professional. I like it

 

It's very clean, but the text is too small.

 

Text is ridiculously small. I have 20/20 vision and I still have to squint to see the text.

 

Perhaps you're the one that should get a spanking. The main text should never be that small. Is there a reason all of it is in english and the about us is in a different language? The abundance of white space isn't used well, it just looks plain and rushed. A texture or reduction of white space whether through actual reduction or a bit more content would enhance this. I had a giggle at the "designed by Mrskellington" watermark at the top. It's a bit weird that all of it is bullet pointed and so succinct yet the about us has a short novel in it too. Lastly, it's weird that all the text is centered yet in the Why Us section it is split, it looks out of place.

 

I like the design really simple and clean.

 

Common filler text to show what it would look like completed. Google lorem ipsum.

 

Too small text, which ain't eye-catching at all. Personally, I like that it is simple with the white background as you've used aswell. But you should maybe consider the text-size ^^

 

Not a huge fan of the white but nice work!

 

Its nice but as everyone said increase the size of the text/images. Also try and bring out the difference in the background as there is gray then white then gray try and increase the contrast a bit. Also the laptop image is a bit awkward. Try and play around with it the image inside the laptop is pixilated fix that and just mess around with the angle of it. Overall all tho its nearly there.