Help and improvment?

Here is my first YouTube video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EdR-3CtCABU

Do you guys have any tips? Or anything I can improve on? also do you guys have any good ideas for future videos?

 

1. Better intro, I would recommend you either getting someone to make you a basic but effective introduction, or use a template from either YouTube or off Google.

2. Watch when editing your videos with your cuts, I understand you're trying to cut out stuff you've probably messed up on, but you will need to allow it to blend with the video, and not overlap what you've just said.

3. Don't be so serious, lighten up abit, smile and have fun.

You'll get better over time but those are just some things I picked up on.

 

thanks still would like more tips?

 

bumppp

 

bump anyone?

 

Be yourself
Never pretend to be anyone else other than yourself
Do what you do and enjoy

If people will find your personality and content interesting / Entertaining they will continue following you, if you switch from being yourself to someone else it will effect your viewers.

 

thanks anything else anyone?

 

Can always improve on a better intro. Also, just have fun with it and have a plan how your structuring video before, helps when editing time comes.

 

thanks anyone else and feel free to subscribe guys

 

bumppp

 

bumppp

 

Not sure how to respond to this.

I watched it and respect for showing yourself in the first video

I'd reccomend actually uploading a gameplay commentary or whatever your favorite thing is and posting it here for better feedback because I can't give any feedback on this video.

The only advice I can give as somebody who spends way too many hours watching youtube is to make sure you would want to watch your content before you upload it. There is so many people trying to "get big" on youtube that it is cesspool of pointless crap. With that said, just upload whatever you feel deserves it and if it does not fall into the category of "pointless crap", especially in the COD community, you will do fine. If it is pointless crap and you're doing it to try to be rich and famous than I would advise you to not pursue it because you won't get anywhere.

Nothing negative, all opinions, and I honestly wish you the best of luck, as much as one stranger on the internet can to another stranger on the internet.

 

thanks a lot, please subscribe more videos coming

 

bumppp

 

Just be urself, no point putting on an act which you cant maintain in every video

 

thanks any more?

 

Stop staring at your keyboard

 

Just finished watching your video.
1) Be less awkward
2)Don't get distracted by things around you
3)Be more enthusiastic
4)Find copyright free music to have it in your backround while playing games or vlogging
5)Have eye catching thumbnails

 

thanks wanna make a official thread will a mod please close thise

 

mods?