read/ comment on my report..

EDIT: ok, i've finished it i've gout about 3 and a half hours till due date PLEASE someone read this and tell me what its missing, its gotta look like i've been working on it all night

TOPIC is news & media

The media plays a very key and strategic role in our society. The majority socialistic people that make up the good 'ol USA think that the television is basically the single most important thing in their lives and it would never lie to them. Sometimes yes this is true but then agene whos to say its not? Actually to tell you the truth, about 75% of all news is exaggerated, now that’s not an exact percentage but still I’d say its pretty close. I mean seriously, have you ever taken the time to read threw some of the magazines at the grocery store while waiting to checkout? There’s all ways something being blow way out of proportion such as Brittany spears so what if she got hooked on pills....and dropped out of drug rehab...and cut off her hair...well mabie not everyone randomly cuts off their hair but still people do this sort of stuff everyday.
You all remember 9/11 right? Well I urge you all to take a look at this: http://www.prisonplanet.com/articles/february2007/260207building7.htm
It's an article about how the goverment basicly "controled" if you will, the news and media during a national crisis.
Now i'll get off the bad government and lying news channels.
The media dose help alot,even if the weather channel is most of the time wrong..(i know i said constructive criticism from here on out but i lied haha). But anywho, if we didn't have the radio, T.V, ect... then it would basically be word-of-mouth and you know people LOVE to make things sound a lot worse then they really are. Let me give an example. Have you ever played that game in Elementry School called like telephone or something like that? You know how the phrase you start with is total different from when it reaches the other side of the room? Yah, it's kinda like that.
Well i think my word limit is about up so i’ll stop typing now (haha).
-Chuck White


okie, its not done yet, but its due to my teacher tonight at 12:00 tonight.
BTW, its a term paper that i decided to write at the last moment *dolp* and is worth some mucho grande points. i donno how ur skools grade, but i'll basicly fail the class if i fuck this up so lol, any help?

 

i thought that your report was well written and it prove a ghood point

 

not bad.

 

When I did my speech for an Internal Assessment at school, when I gave statistics the teacher later said that I should have mentioned where I got my statistics from, although because I hadn't known this she didn't let it affect my mark, however in my next year at HS she said that it will. So where you have statistics/ figure you should say "According To (Enter Source Here) 75% of all news is exagerrated" etc; . Good report so far though. Hope this helped a little, good luck with the rest.