Im sorry, did you post a thread? XXXVVXXZZ

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work on a more defined light source and think more about where the shadows should be as it looks a bit flat.

also the composition needs a little work because the focal point is that yellow heart shaped bit underneath the S

colours are a bit off as well but they're not bad at all it could just be my preference.

i think the opacity of a lot of the shapes ruins the depth, too, along with the lack of defined light/dark spaces

 

Lol, I did this in 30 minutes cuz I was bored. Any resemblance of lighting is really not intentional + it's kinda flat-low poly

 

Wow that's awesome, very abstract and different!

 

Low poly 'flat' is still subject to lighting cues. Low poly is by definition not flat, it's low poly.

Also squidge you mah nigga.

 

Great critique, I agree with most of it. All of my art knowledge from the mandatory classes I've taken in my lifetime came flowing back but the image itself isn't bad at all. I like the coloring scheme. I think the main thing that would be great to see changed is the focal point.

 

i likeeeee it man "

 

Eye grabbing colors, very cool for a 30 minute throw together.

 

That actually looks really cool man, nicely done

 

changing the OP renders the given feedback useless for any other readers since we have nothing to compare the feedback to

 

Your art style is really interesting. Minimal but very nice. I dig it.