Animated Signature For Pokemon Creed

Honestly, it looks amateurish.

Font and size of the signature needs to be changed.

 

Try working with some more effects text wise, and focus a little less on the actual animation itself. The point of a signature is to draw the attention of whoever's interested in your services to your services, so the more professional your signature looks, the more professional you look. Try some tutorials on youtube about making basic c4d/photoshop text, and try to find some nice fonts on dafont.com

 

Looks good imo, could use a background behind the address. Maybe some flames on the sides. I like the animation.

I personally might try a screenie from the game as a background but it might not work.

 

I like how the Pokémon is layered in fro t of the text.

 

u wot m8


I'll try break some things down. imo, I think the font is fine.
The biggest problem is just the spacing and layout. Why have you used huge font sizes and left 0 empty spaces with a huge fuckin flying pokemon in our face and a background with insane exposure. The first thing you should work on is why do you need to tell the target audience that they have to click the button to go to the site. That seems pretty obvious. Unless your target is viewers below the age of 3, you don't need to give instructions and overall making it look worse.
You also probably want to resize the pokemon(no idea what their names are), because it's pretty huge and I see you've tried a cool concept of making it overlap but it really is just getting in the way of the header. We can barely make out 'Pokemon Creed'.

Really, I like the colours and everything used it could just be tweaked so it's not so 'in your face' and hard to comprehend for a moment.

 

Looks bad imo