3d to 2d

i took some advice and tried 2d instead of 3d, leave some advice http://gyazo.com/2461c8bee204abcbecbc78f73f9a61d2

 

bump.

 

I like the background effects but hate the font. Try filling up the canvas or resizing it.

Edit: But if youre working on making a font I may have some tips-?

your ava gets me every time. I always look away dramatically expecting a camera..

 

There is too much negative space. Try adding a gradient to bring out the text more. Not sure if that is a stroke, or the style of the font (outlining), it's too thick.

 

The background is awesome, but the font/wording killed it, try using a darker font and more cursive.

 

The outlining imo, looks more white than blue if you look at it from a distance.

 

Background looks OK, but you could show more of it, and as others have said, change the font, and the white outline.

 

what you did is take your 3d style an try to use them effects in 2d. you need to change your whole style. try making a mood bored before you start designing. when i make somthing 80% of my time is spent on other thing rather than in the program. you need to plan out your designs a bit better, don't just open the program and go.