Old Intro / Rate and Comment!

Just waiting for someone to give me a price check on my pure so i figure I might as well share some graphics and occupy my time.

Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YrDGRU2o_DE​

The "E" was pentooled out by me back when i was a butcher with the pentool. Only attempt i've ever made at a C4D intro, took around an hour and a half to make i'd say excluding rendering. What do you guys think? Maybe rating out of ten? Comments or constructive criticism?

 

The music sinc works well and overall its a nice simplistic intro, good job.

Only real advice I can give is keep practicing and try some harder animations and effects if you want to get better, KIU

 

I think it's great, especially if it's your first attempt at c4d, and it's old. Great job, for sure.