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Zealot Reyes · Feb 22, 2014

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Can you delete this thread please? I dont want to be marked for plagiarism
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Alright so i need to right about an issue in the world and suggested here,i wrote about north korea. Now alot of you people here are smarter than me and can help point out errors whether they it be incorrect information about my topic, Or suggest improvements. Im also assigned to use literary devices and two i have used is imagery and diction,You all can judge if i have used them correctly.
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North korea. Media coverage seems to cover everything in north korea except its humanitarian crisis. We always hear about its nuclear threats or about his uncles execution and other things but a lot of people overlook north korea and what actually occurs in there. People slaves to their own countries,Human experimentation at prison camps,And violation of basic human rights.
And images of north korean camps look and are similar nazi prison camps during the holocaust. An event that killed six million people. This happens daily and is still happening today.

What people of north korean prison camps experience is torture. On a daily basis. Forced to work hard labor in repressive labour camps,Or used for human experimentation for chemical weapons,Deadly gas grenades or used by north korean surgeons to practice. They will also use prisoners as target practice and many people live their whole lives in these camps. Born and die there where they never actually get to see the world for what it is. They live the poorest quality lives and wished they could do what we take for granted. Sleep comfortably,Receive proper education, Drink clean water. Most prisoners have never even experienced having a full stomach because they’re constantly starving,And treated like lab rats.

It doesnt take much to be arrested in north korea and the second you were sent in a camp,You were regarded as an animal.And if guards did not like someone, They can basically do whatever they pleased to said prisoner. Children begin labor around the age of six and normally do jobs such as pushing mine carts while the adults filled them. Public executions were performed to instill fear in other prisoners, and attendance is mandatory. They would learn to obey or else they would die and their family at times as well.

And the oppression isnt just limited to prison camps,But the whole country ruled by dictator kin jong un. The world outside north korea is inconceivable to many, The only way to know about information outside north korea is through radio although if caught listening to western media, It will likely cost you time at a prison camp.What is it for to live a life without enough food,poverty and no freedom, Just because the selfish and incompetent are in control of people who wish they can possess personal power.

More people need to be aware of the real horrors of north korea because in media, Most headliners when it comes to north korea is about kim jong un’s friendship with dennis rodman.
The media ignores what is most important and what needs to be more widely publicized. Because half of you here were probably unaware of the prison camps, human experimentation, public executions,and so forth. And if more people start seeing the true terrors behind the north korean border, Just maybe someone can find a way to influence change in north korea and possibly even find a way to liberate the people of north korea.
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Zealot Reyes · Feb 22, 2014

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Delete thread please,thanks
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R · Feb 27, 2014

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