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First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
  1. Unread #1 - Feb 8, 2014 at 4:36 PM
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    First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
    fist it up
    i bonked it down
    we kept on life
    in struggle of time
    goosebumps on my legs
    we swaggy-swaggy it up
    with the bumps on the trumps
    anybody claimin' they pack heat
    we scared to bowl the told
    of the informative school
    fuckface came, and reigned
    we ruled the boy in da hood
    with his trousers on his wool
    wanna be a baller
    listen to logic
    he rap worse than me do
    my lyrical skills prove points
    far beyond what eminem and beyonce
    could bounce in theyre tracks
    banging banging we keep on flagging

    This is my first rap lyric and it took around 6 hours to make, if you dont like, dont comment but please critise if u like because yeah, well, fuckfaces GL :laugh:
     
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  3. Unread #2 - Feb 10, 2014 at 12:24 PM
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    First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
    I really do not like these lyrics, and it has English errors that are unbecoming of even rap lyrics. Swaggy-swaggy.
     
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  5. Unread #3 - Feb 10, 2014 at 7:39 PM
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    First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
    I believe I could vomit up a better rap than this. 6 hours, what did you spend the 6 hours doing? This isn't even 16 bars, unless you're going to rap really, really, really slow. There is no flow, clever jokes, or any discernible theme.

    OP surely you're trolling.
     
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  7. Unread #4 - Feb 10, 2014 at 9:18 PM
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    First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
    This x10

    This is garbage. If you're going to troll, make it funny bad.
     
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  9. Unread #5 - Feb 11, 2014 at 12:18 PM
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    anybody claimin' they pack heat
    we scared to bowl the told
    of the informative school

    is my best flow, learnn to write lyrics
     
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  11. Unread #6 - Feb 11, 2014 at 1:24 PM
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    it is literally complete shit.
     
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  13. Unread #7 - Feb 11, 2014 at 1:41 PM
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    OP if you really took any sort of time to write this you should an hero immediately.

    Poor quality troll is poor quality
     
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  15. Unread #8 - Feb 11, 2014 at 2:23 PM
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    First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
    this is straight trash, no recycle
    i got more bars on my bicycle. LOL
     
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  17. Unread #9 - Feb 11, 2014 at 2:37 PM
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    Dude, this is amazing.
     
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  19. Unread #10 - Feb 12, 2014 at 12:26 AM
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    Oh shittt.

    OP you need to work on your lyrics.. swaggy swaggy really?
     
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  21. Unread #11 - Feb 12, 2014 at 4:27 AM
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    I stopped reading at Swaggy-Swaggy.
     
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  23. Unread #12 - Feb 12, 2014 at 10:22 AM
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    Swaggy swaggy really?...
     
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  25. Unread #13 - Feb 12, 2014 at 12:50 PM
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    you guys are just mad cuz u cant compete with me, fagfukos
     
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  27. Unread #14 - Feb 12, 2014 at 12:50 PM
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    First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
    my director claiming he be good for me and i learn lots of music stuff haha ;P
     
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  29. Unread #15 - Feb 12, 2014 at 12:53 PM
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    First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
    will u buy my ep when it comes? plz
     
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  31. Unread #16 - Feb 12, 2014 at 1:21 PM
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    OP your director/producer whoever is a fool. There are illiterate people who can write a better rap. If you aren't trolling then good god.
     
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  33. Unread #17 - Feb 12, 2014 at 1:34 PM
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    First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
    dam man, that shit is dank as fuk, you tryna drop an album anytime soon?
     
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  35. Unread #18 - Feb 12, 2014 at 6:45 PM
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    First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
    Sounds like he wants to make some money of you somehow..

    swaggy-swaggy lol'd
     
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  37. Unread #19 - Feb 13, 2014 at 9:53 AM
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    First rap lyric (rated good so far 7,6/10)
    if my director says it good its good. you have no talent in rap and lyrical possesion.
     
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  39. Unread #20 - Feb 13, 2014 at 11:19 AM
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