First Time With Graphics

Hey guys, this was my first time with graphic arts other than using photoshop in school, i followed a few tutorials and came up with these 2 artworks!

please give me some feedback and i take all criticism

Also if you would you think im good enough to create you any art work please dont hesitate to ask me on skype, i will be stick with graphic arts because i find it fun and creative.. hope to be good enough one day for people to want to pay for my artwork

Skype : DaanDesigns

Artwork One:


Artwork Two:

 

Very good man! For a first time, it is fantastic. Keep it up

 

Thanks, man i just need to learn to code the sections of the art work to link and stuff , maybe tomorrow ill learn that

 

For a first time thats amazing, it looks quite like lootz new signature with the wings and the blue and grey text.
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The wings don't look good with the font. Or maybe it's the wings themselves? It looks awesome being your first time.

(I use to think I was awesome using Paint.NET)

 

You should either make the wings look better or just get rid of them completely and add something else, other than that looks good.

 

I would make the backgrounds transparent. For a first signature it's really good. Keep learning from tutorials and you'll only get better.

 

Thanks, yea i used L00tz Signature as a Design to copy but not 100% just give me something to work off, and learn how to blend objects into others.

 

In my personal opinion the one with the wings would look a lot better without the wings either way, and once again for your first projects they look really good .

 

Thanks Zoot

 

Nice... . First time? *Mind Blown*