My first song check it out

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  1. Unread #1 - Dec 7, 2013 at 1:40 AM
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  3. Unread #2 - Dec 8, 2013 at 2:17 AM
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    My first song check it out
    It's pretty good for your first song you still got some work to do obviously but i would say for your first one you are on the right track.
     
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    Honestly was horrible, sorry.
     
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    Sorry.
     
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    My first song check it out
    Nice intro, but i feel bad because the rapping was shitty, you need to think about the words you use, like the opening line "this worlds so fucked up, everywhere you go everyone's drugged up" its not expressive i think is the word of the person you are.
     
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