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What I could improve?

 

Its clear atleast, Text is not the best choice, and the grey wavy lines dont seem to have any reason. 4/10 becuase its clean. Maybe more emphasis on text.

 

What program(s) are you using? It will let us know your limitations.

 

Photoshop - NO LIMITATIONS! ba Text...

 

give some variety of value to the gray stroke. other than that for this style it looks good.

 

idk whats going on with the font, I assume you made it yourself with the paintbrush. Although the kerning is not too bad. But there is a little nick inbetween the C and the H.

I like the green and purple lines going outward, they remind me of the northern lights - did you make a line then blur them with the blur tool?

Im not really liking the grey strokes going through, perhaps using 'simulate pressure' with the pen tool would produce a better result?

And maybe its just me but I dont like the orange glow in the center. I think a different color or different placing might be better.

For creating arrays try moving a layers center point [the crosshair in the center of your selection when you ctrl+t] then moving the selection. Once you move it; repeatedly hit ctrl+shift+alt+T to repaste your selection with the same distance you moved it the first time..

hope that made sense lol

 

the text wasn't created by me, and I see mmm , I was thinking of removing the line but lost the PSD again .... I need a graphic designer to teach me more, I see everyones points

 

BACK UP your work!

 

Bad choice of font.

Smudging on the far right if pretty bad as well. Too noticeable, not in a good way.

I see the direction you were going in (Abstract), but this is sloppy.

You seem pretty amateur (not a bad thing), I suggest looking up some tutorials on youtube and deviantart, they can help a lot.

 

My dad has put many locks on youtube, and finds out ever time I uses a proxy, the videos also now don't load right when I bypass with https or uses a proxy, I can only watch on the ipad... My brother fault, he used 200gb in a day....

 

Better than a lot of stuff I've commented on today. Certainly more original.