My first tag.

This was my first tag

CNC is appreciated.

Rate it out of 10.

 

Lighting, lighting, lighting. It's the biggest part of the tag, of most tags to be honest.


All of that will give off light so there is really no reason to have an outside light source. You can work the effects around those and have more dramatic lighting.

I'll stick with that for right now. There are a lot of pieces in this that could be fixed and here is a short overview:
Lack of effects
Depth
General composition

 

Was hoping you'd reply to this.
Thanks for the info, i'll post a v2 when I got time :>

 

LQ

Sharpen!! Make better use of the lighting to make it more realistic.

 

Great feedback Emperor_Nero, i agree.

As it stands now i would rate this a 7/10 gj mate.

 

I would agree with the lack of effects and depth.

With that said it also looks a little dark (not sure if that is what you like), but I don't personally like wasted dark space. That part is your call!

Disregarding the dark spaces, I'd give it an 8/10!

I am eager for a V2

 

8/10 kinda hard to recognize what it is

 

Framing is poor. Little to no focus as. Text is little more than an afterthough.

Your mastery of technology is good but the execution and concept leaves much to be desired.

 

Haha buddy, there isn't a focal at all pretty good for a first tag to...