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  1. Unread #1 - Sep 28, 2013 at 2:54 PM
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    My first tag.
    This was my first tag :p

    CNC is appreciated.

    Rate it out of 10.

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  3. Unread #2 - Sep 28, 2013 at 4:08 PM
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    My first tag.
    Lighting, lighting, lighting. It's the biggest part of the tag, of most tags to be honest.

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    All of that will give off light so there is really no reason to have an outside light source. You can work the effects around those and have more dramatic lighting.

    I'll stick with that for right now. There are a lot of pieces in this that could be fixed and here is a short overview:
    Lack of effects
    Depth
    General composition
     
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  5. Unread #3 - Sep 28, 2013 at 4:33 PM
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    My first tag.
    Was hoping you'd reply to this.
    Thanks for the info, i'll post a v2 when I got time :>
     
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  7. Unread #4 - Sep 28, 2013 at 6:24 PM
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    My first tag.
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    Sharpen!! Make better use of the lighting to make it more realistic.
     
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  9. Unread #5 - Sep 28, 2013 at 10:39 PM
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    My first tag.
    Great feedback Emperor_Nero, i agree.

    As it stands now i would rate this a 7/10 gj mate.
     
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  11. Unread #6 - Oct 2, 2013 at 1:39 AM
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    My first tag.
    I would agree with the lack of effects and depth.

    With that said it also looks a little dark (not sure if that is what you like), but I don't personally like wasted dark space. That part is your call!

    Disregarding the dark spaces, I'd give it an 8/10!

    I am eager for a V2
     
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    My first tag.
    8/10 kinda hard to recognize what it is
     
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    My first tag.
    Framing is poor. Little to no focus as. Text is little more than an afterthough.

    Your mastery of technology is good but the execution and concept leaves much to be desired.
     
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  17. Unread #9 - Oct 19, 2013 at 4:58 PM
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    My first tag.
    Haha buddy, there isn't a focal at all :p pretty good for a first tag to... :)
     
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