[Competition]Fiction Story Competition[PRIZES]

Fiction story competition​

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Hey all, I will be hosting a competition; the outlines of the competition is as follows:


Rules/Guidelines
You may submit one story, preferably 1 paragraph consisting of roughly 10 lines, give or take.
The story must be fiction (Make believe, imaginative, made up)
Trolling/pathetic stories will not be tolerated You all know what I mean.
You may not ask people to vote for yourself to benefit yourself within the competition - if you are found to break said rules, you will be DQ.
Have fun.

Prizes:
It is not yet confirmed what the prizes may be; With the approval of Big Rich (Hopefully he replies to this thread) there may be a minirank incorporated as a prize.. If not, the winner will receive 5M 07GP.




You have exactly 1 week from todays date, to enter your submission. Following that, there will be a poll within the sand box for people to vote on their favourite submission. Remember to make your story as entertaining as possible, use your imagination!
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I couldn't take a dump on the toilet, i kept pushing over and over and OVER
but then, a miracle happened. i screamed Asapgang and it dumped so smoothly

end of story i would like to have my price

 

I'm lying in a cold flat bed, I can feel the springs digging into my back, it's been around 5 hours since I woke up, just laying here frozen looking into darkness. I can't make out anything around me except a slightly glowing white figure that has been standing at my bedside for hours now, I can't just lay here anymore but every time I go to get up my body feels numb.. frozen.. I don't know what else to do, I go to open my mouth to scream but the creature places itself over me almost looking like it's smiling at me but instead blood drips from it's mouth and teeth.. I try again and again to scream but nothing happens.. I don't know how to get out of here.. help.

Bump! Come on everyone.

 

Bump for Asap, a free $15 pretty much for a few lines come on people!

 

Rofl, doesn't look like this competition was a success -.-

 

not over yet

 

Lol I must have written this 3-4 years ago as it was in some old text file for an imaginative story I was supposed to write for one of my English classes. I never used it. Anyway, I have a piece that was written to be the beginning of a story which I never fully fleshed out. It's over 10 lines though, and is 3 paragraphs (392 words). Let me know if you want me to post it or if it's too long.

 

The ground suddenly fell away from under my feet. Branches and twigs scratched furiously at my face, then I could feel the moist ground cushion my fall. Looking around, I saw a snake loom out of the darkness, it coiled and struck. Again and again, burying it's nurotoxin filled fangs into my stomach. I open and closed my month, nothing coming out. A mist filled my eyes, and that was the last thing I could remember.

Common guys!

 

With regards to the outlines of the competition being:
Does this mean the stories must be related to TWCs or what?
Will enter this.

 

you want to open up your mouth chloe?

 

A cold morning in Odessa​

Yuri woke to another cold morning in Odessa, the icy cold winters were never his favourite time of year. The panoramic view from his apartment overlooking the Black sea was doing nothing to lighten his mood today, especially after yesterdays turn of events.

Managing to throw himself out of bed, Yuri collected his warrant card and Glock. The blood stained barrel giving a solemn reminder of Operation Blackwatch, resulting in the loss of his partner.

Yuri had preprepared his debrief for the Foreign Intelligence Service of Ukraine (SZRU), identifying what went wrong, and more significantly, why Yuri was resigning from the agency. He had lost his edge.

Putting on his suit and leaving the apartment, he was apprehensive of how the agency would take the news of his resignation, especially after Blackwatche's failings. His failings. Yuri did not have to wait until the meeting to find out. A gentle *tick* as he turned on his cars ignition was enough for Yuri to know his time was up, a gentle smile crossed his lips, a sense of relief flooded his mind, he no longer had to live with the guilt. The agency was never one to tolerate failure.

 

I didn't know this was going on, or I'd have written this idea out sooner

My story doesn't quite fit the guidelines, so feel free not to count it as part of the contest - I just wanted to share it here!

My story

Edit: I'll also try to write one that does work when I have the time

 

LOL this story is much longer than 1 paragraph,already lost :L
I lived in a horrible poor neighborhood my whole life. I have seen death,poverty,drugs... from living in the "east side". People would be scared to come to the east side,Intimidated. My dad died was killed in a robbery when i was 3 so my mom was raising me,my brother and sister alone. We did get help from family aswell such as cousins/ect. But being poor isnt fun. We sucked off government aid because we needed it and we still couldnt get anywhere. I got involved in some serious stuff. My mom was poor and we were going to lose our small apartment. My brother was handicapped so he couldnt provide and my sister is young. Anyways when i was 14 i got involved in gangs. I saw it as protection,back-up and i sold drugs,hustled and i made alot of money i wont lie. With the money i had i was able to get my family back on their feet,Even get luxuries such as a flat screen television,Buy my brother a car,And my mom purses and all that. Well at 16,I was committed to my so called "homies" they have helped me so much,This may sound like bullshit but they helped me with alot more than you'd think. But they wanted me to kill someone. I felt liked i owed them it too. I was perfect,Young..good grades,successful and no criminal record at all,Not even a first offence. And i felt like i owed them it and they convinced me i wouldnt get caught. I carried it out,Someone else came with me who would be a great friend of mine. At night we both go at night,And break in. We see the boy sleeping,Doesnt look older than 14 i had no idea why they wanted him dead,I still dont know today. But i had a job to do. my partner looked out,gave me a heads up and i did it. He woke up while i was stabbing him the chest,Screaming begging for his mother before gasping then dying. I heard footsteps and ran away as fast as i can. The next day i felt horrible,Watching the news as the mother of the boy i killed crying,And all the family heart-broken. Maybe he witnessed something he was not supposed to see. I dont know but it haunted me. His bloody body as i wildy stabbed him the second he woke up. My friend didnt see but he was scared too. He didnt want to get deep,He just wanted some money is all. Same situation as me. My family did decent at this point,My mother didnt even know i did stuff like this,I told her i got the money from merching stuff on ebay,Id buy stuff for the people i was with so it made sense. Anyways 17 and im assigned a second person. This time its a rival gang member. Im not sure if the first one was too it didnt seem like it but i did it with the same friend i was with last time. But when going there at night,A car pulls up and all i hear is gunfire. Boom Boom Boom Boom Boom! I run as fast as i can along with my friend who got shot but in the leg,when running we see the car following us and i hear a person get out,i turned around and see a large man with a pistol,as im running a member of the gang i was in runs in and fires at the car. what i see next is horrible. i see blood splatter as he shoots his third bullet,He is shot once or twice in the chest,falling immediately. I retaliate and kill the driver,Then the large man who was on foot. The day after my gang congratulates me on the mission but i felt nothing. i felt dark and bitter. My friend felt the same way,He could handle it. He would cry for hours at a time knowing that the people he killed were simply people trying to make it along with the rest of us. they did intend to kill us but its a dog eat dog world. But i just couldnt bear it i still have it imprinted in my brain the bloody scene that has occured just a day before,I was mentally damaged. I felt like i was used by a gang just to kill. I was nothing but just a useless run of the mill thug. I just joined to make my family money and provide,and im now a killer and a ranker. The last thing that made me leave my town to join the military is the rival gang knew who we were since we made such a huge scene but luckily did not get caught by the law but while walking home my mom stopped me from entering the house. She knew what i did and wanted nothing to do with me anymore. I dont think she understood the whole thing how i was in a way pressured to do it,But she didnt want me anymore she knew i was in the fight earlier and didnt want any of my siblings or her in danger such as the one i was placed in. She told me to leave and to never return. I in anger just left, she didnt know how much ive been through to keep the rest of them safe,but i was stupid. I left in anger,A month later i come back but they're gone. My mom has left along with my siblings to leave me alone with this band of idiots who got me into all this. Well i had it. I felt my life was pointless. My mom hates me,im hunted by the rival gang,at this point i didnt care about what my gang thought....I ran away to oregon where i started a drug habit. That ended me,took my money,took what was left of my life away. I did just weed for a few months but then i went up and up and i started to do heroin,coccaine which just ended me,i lived alone in the streets with no friends,suffering from withdrawl and any money i got would go right to drugs,no family,no hope. Thats it. I go to the streets,Go to a ally. This is it,I walk into a apartment complex...go all the way to the top ignoring everyone in the way and say my final words.
I hope you're happy mom....i did all this for you.
As i sit in the edge,legs dangling off the edge.
Final push....
Goodbye.

Theres my submission,Goodluck everyone ^.^
(story may be broken,I re-wrote it 2 or 3 times and i suck at this)

 

Vote for subaru

 

thanks - think there will be a poll after 1 week

 

Here is my entry:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EjCHdjRoj1umToWe0oEA9EyQ7Xz67HzCDoiqHTtHqnY/edit?usp=sharing

 

When is this going to poll?

 

The world may never know

 

Oh dear, Overkill much

 

As I stepped out of my warm, cozy home a chilling winter breeze hit my face. Immediately, I reached into my torn leather bag to get my blue knit scarf. Before I could get my scarf, I heard a strange whistling sound coming from down the street. I tried to locate the noise but to no avail. That's when I realized it: It was the day of reckoning. Once a year in our city we nominate two people (a man and woman) to be sacrificed to Cthulhu. We tried going a year without a sacrifice, and boy did we regret it. He struck down our officials and ate the children. I sure do hope we don't have to go through that again...