Some things bruvs

What i've been up to i guess. Proper Cnc only please kty =)




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i like the 3rd one but it needs to be brighter i think! good work tho keep it up

 

Thanks mate, exposure bump.

 

i like the last 3 style them look dope

 

Really like the last one! Definitely my favourite, how long do these take to produce?

 

#1 (superficial one) - Seems to be oversharpened in places and lighting seems to be too intense, there is no focal as everything is so bright, try some vignetting. I'm not even sure what's going on but there is the use of clipping masks that I can ascertain lol. Decent but you can do better imo.

#2 - Oversharpened in places aswell. I'm not that great at c4d pieces so I can't really comment further. The text is integrated decently though I think

#3 - I'm not a fan of black/white pieces but that's just me. The focal is oversharpened and the rest is so dark that it is hard to ascertain the other details.

#4 - It would be nice if the change to black/white was gradual instead of as abrupt as it is.

#5 - Not much I can say, pretty sexy except the text looks out of place

#6 - Another nice piece. Are the chains done in c4d aswell? Is the background a stock or what? Text looks out of place though.

#7 - Nice use of tech brushes. Fade to black on sides could do with a bit of a touch up though, looks a bit messy. Monitor on the left looks a bit low quality.



Overall I'm being quite critical but it's a must for you to improve your game (That's already very good mind you). You're still ahead of me by quite a bit though haha. I'll post some of the shit I've done for school on saturday man ~.^

 

Oooh, lucas me gusta <33 How you been bud. My favorite overall is definitely the last one. Mainly because bigger pieces tend to catch my eye easier. Not only that but the use of colors work very well.

 

Ohh ty babe,



loljk: Thanks for the cnc broski, And #4 or 5 whatver ye chains and all is done in c4d.

 

i like the last two the others eh.. not my style. although the last one, it seems idk like you spilled milk and dint wipe it all away and left a stain lol.

 

Sick work mate!

 

I really Do like the whole concept of the Last Image (the big V), i still need to learn how you make the text have that look where it has some design or texture over it, when ever ive tried it never turns out right

 

Last picture looks great! Can't seem to load the 3rd one but meh, I'll come back and check later. In the mean time, keep up the good work man!

 

I think the last one looks dope.