Graphic?

I was messing around with one of those graphics and made this one, does it look semi legit ?

 

Wrong section mate Requesting move of your thread to : http://www.sythe.org/graphics-discussion-questions/

 

That text is awful, you should try and blend it in a lot more than it is as currently it's sticking out. Also pick a colour scheme, it just looked very messy.

 

Moved.
You should really look into layer styles and blending. Also, your color scheme isn't the greatest.

 

jeeze, ill be sure to work a little harder, im just new you know to the graphics game. Ill be working at it though .