Cracked

Just something I did, beginner at C4D hopefully its ok, let me know how i can improve.

Cheers
I will also take any ideas, or if someone wants me to make them something

 

Hi Harry! Nice piece of art you have there. Your C4D renders/stocks are pretty LQ. I would recommend using higher quality material to compose your pieces.

 

i thank the inside of the c an the e should be transparent so you can see the moon/planet. and the black part on the sideof the k

 

Looks good but like Moonglare said, the effects are pretty low quality.

 

The actual cracking of the text needs to be more defined IMO. As already mentioned try using higher quality C4D renders, I have plenty if you want some. The outer glow doesn't fit with the dark atmosphere of the text so I suggest adding in dark shadowing instead. Little more emphasis on the lighting wouldn't hurt either. Seeing lots of improvement in your work, keep it up.

 

Okay zippy, Where can get some of your C4D renders? And thanks for all the advice

 

Ill pm you a pack I made when I get home from school

 

okay thanks bro

 

It looks okay, the above graphical artists have mentioned a lot, I'm not a graphical artist but as a regular person I'd say you need to work more getting the name Cracked into there, bringing out the definition of it in the image