2nd Try with C4D with Photoshop.

No effects just something simple. Just seeing what kind of feedback i get

Tell me what you think.

 

Good, try getting higher quality stock photos.
You've got a little speck that you need to clean here:
Another, thing that bothers me is the smoke clips here:
Keep practicing!

 

Try not to use distorted fonts in Cinema4D as they come out rough, and LQ looking. Look for more clean, smoother fonts as they are more appealing to the eye.

As moon mentioned always look for the most High quality stock images to use in your work, because low quality images such as those cards look unprofessional.

Great 2nd attempt, keep at it my friend.

 

Okay thank you for the tips guys. Will definitely keep working on it! Im gonna keep looking up some tuts too, to get me more familiar with both programs. I will post some more stuff later on.

 

I actually like it. It's great for a 2nd attempt. Trumps anything I could do.

 

Get better stock photos, also stay away from non-intended hard edges. You can add layer masks to the layer and go over the area with a black brush.