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  1. Unread #1 - Jan 7, 2013 at 12:08 AM
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    ignore colors, cause at this point I've given up trying to get em to work :'(

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  3. Unread #2 - Jan 7, 2013 at 6:48 AM
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    basic composition issues, the yellow line is the focal.

    text is also distracting

    no real lighting

    effect c4d looks tacky and ruins any depth

    oversharpened background
     
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  5. Unread #3 - Jan 7, 2013 at 2:53 PM
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    I like it, would look better if the text was faded into the background.
     
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  7. Unread #4 - Jan 8, 2013 at 4:11 PM
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    I think you aligned the text too close together. You should border them and drop shadow to make it much more appealing.
     
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