Slash Tag

Bored, made a quick tag CnC welcome.
First vertical tag btw.

 

This looks nice! especially the colored version
you could work on the depth a little bit more though

Like the part of c4d in the foreground, you can blur that out way more
and also sharpen your render a bit more, cause right now it seems the background is sharper than the render itself

And the music notes are a nice touch but the ones in front of his guitar and hand,, I'd remove those, they look out of place

Love to see a second improved version, but this looks nice already

 

composition needs work and you kinda just whored a c4d to make this

 

Im really digging the coloured version. the lighting is great, everything flow's nicely and the colours just go together well. nice work mate

 

The lighting is really bad as well as the depth. I would drop the borders as they just don't look good at all and ruin the feel of any piece almost. The focal and the c4ds are at completely different sharpnesses (the c4d is way too sharp and it looks close to the 'camera' than the focal.) and that shouldn't be because the c4d should be an element that brings depth and it is jut way oversharpened here. Remember the close things get and the further away things get the more they blur and lower in contrast because of atmospheric perspective.